Typo
The Emperor knew that they had survived, in one manner or another. Reports back from the front had made it clear that some ships had escaped the system before the Hammer of the Empire could be brought down on them, and not ever enemy ship had fallen in the final battle.
In the aftermath, however, there had been no sign of them.every
Loving it, I'm having withdrawals when I don't get my daily fix of The Seed .... Any idea when you may be publishing it in Kindle?
Minor typo: Bell continued to fire as they approached the fight from range.
She had a point, Steph know, (Knew)
The will have backups, (They)
The Drasin were from "after" his time, (Before)
The will have back ups.
They will have back ups.
missing word
And the longer anyone waited… well, the more those self replicating satellites there would be, having scavenged material from every last object in their range to build more of themselves.
more of those
typo
A massive self replicating network of satellites that essentially weaponized the power output of the sun itself had turned the Sol system into a memorial to a civilization that dared stand up to the aggression of a Galactic power and, thought it lost, had broken the Empire in the process.
though
I missed the transition between Amanda and Colonol Keenan as we kill one group of Drasin then step over still cooling corpses. This caused some confusion for me and some spacial confusion as I didn't think Amanda had just passed the command deck door.
what are the guarding? (They)
invited more would be… unwise.” (Inviting)
A great story in the series. Hope the Imps get their comeuppance.
I don't really understand why Robert's felt need to Sue anti-matter
That was a perfect chapter
Didn't see or look for problems
I like it. Good plot. Flows well.
Typo?
Skipper is all het up about something,
Sentence doesn't seem to make sense
Let’s calm the Calm the skipper’s nerves, Hoorah?”
What your eight low, boss, swarm inbound.”
Should they be "watch your eight"
Tahyon particles, as a glass of sub-atomic elements
I think it should be "as a class..."
one another brother, there was no inbetween.”
Need space between in and between
Those bastards right a tight ship, even today.”
Typo run a tight ship
Spelling correction needed "They cam through our armor"
Author's Response: Got it, thanks
“Understood. Step back please,” She said, pushing her gently to the rear, not that he was resisting at all. Change (her) to (him)
Author's Response: Corrected. Thanks
Really enjoying this book. The action so far has been exhilarating. If it weren't for the numerous typos I'd give it 5 stars.
the Gaian ship was showing incredibly acceleration potential" I think (incredibly) should be "incredible"
Author's Response: Thanks, got it.
Chapter 35 looks perfect to me.
Looks like I can't edit after posting review,
this is for 34 Chapter 32, previous chapter was 33 Chapter 32, even if top of page says Chapter 33.
Requesting ammo and back-up, either or would be...
That should be;
either or both would be appreciated.
A famous author (one so famous I can't remember his name) said, 'You do not finish a book, you abandon it'
I'm referring to myself, I finished one book and well into the sequel, but going back to first book to maintain continuity I find myself re-editing the first book.