Name: Hugh Blair (Anonymous) · Datum: 04 Mar 2023 11:22:29 · Für: Chapter 8

Very enjoyable and encouraging. I hope this is a series that sees the "seeds" grow to maturity 

Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Datum: 04 Mar 2023 9:55:57 · Für: Chapter 3

“But their has to be something we can do."

 

There ?

Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Datum: 04 Mar 2023 9:25:50 · Für: Chapter 2

"Nothing of import was located."

" The rest were of little import in the long run, and would most likely be abs"

 

Importance ?

Name: Druidan (Anonymous) · Datum: 03 Mar 2023 12:58:23 · Für: Chapter 1

Just realised this had been put up, must have missed the notification...

Name: Alejandro (Anonymous) · Datum: 03 Mar 2023 12:09:43 · Für: Chapter 7

and say high, give you -> and say hi, give you 

Name: Hugh Blair (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Mar 2023 9:22:12 · Für: Chapter 6

Continue to build a great story 

Name: Stuart S (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Mar 2023 4:44:37 · Für: Chapter 3

“But their has to be something we can do.”

There, their, they're

Name: John E (Anonymous) · Datum: 01 Mar 2023 19:04:21 · Für: Chapter 5

Typo:  Thought should be though

"adhered to military discipline as thought born to it"

Excited to read more!

Name: Alejandro (Anonymous) · Datum: 01 Mar 2023 12:08:58 · Für: Chapter 5

not ever enemy ship -> not every enemy ship

It's looking good!

Name: Keith Hancock (Anonymous) · Datum: 05 Feb 2023 7:17:29 · Für: Chapter 3

Another excellent chapter.  Certainly curious to find out what has become of Weston.

Name: Andrew Beeber (Anonymous) · Datum: 05 Feb 2023 7:05:55 · Für: Chapter 3

Interesting see the old characters age. And the tantilizing hint that there could be things happening on Earth.

Thanks for sharing.

Name: Andrew Beeber (Anonymous) · Datum: 05 Feb 2023 6:47:07 · Für: Chapter 1

Great start, like where you're going with this!

 

Name: Hugh Blair (Anonymous) · Datum: 04 Feb 2023 22:22:29 · Für: Chapter 3

I like where this is going. Still sharp characters and complex plot development. 

Name: Keith Hancock (Anonymous) · Datum: 04 Feb 2023 7:47:53 · Für: Chapter 2

I like the direction this is taking and the writing is, as always, excellent.  Other than a few typos and a few un-caught homonyms, this chapter was an easy read.  Thank you for posting them!

Keith

Name: Chuck Craig (Anonymous) · Datum: 03 Feb 2023 18:22:58 · Für: Chapter 1

Well written, sad to read of course.  30 years is a long time.  It's nice to see the story will go forward, but damn Evan, the price!!!

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Feb 2023 23:12:47 · Für: Chapter 1

Great begining.

Ooops, Kardie don"t accept the IFF codes, this surprised me... and finally Steph is with Mila😅

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Feb 2023 22:44:36 · Für: Chapter 1

Evan very thanks, i am so happy that you start a new story from our beloved series... 11 points from 10 for you Evan 😁

 

Name: Gianluca Benedetti (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Feb 2023 16:19:55 · Für: Chapter 1

Great intro! Simply great. I have an idea about who is controlling earth's defenses, that is to say that I think I picked E. Currie's clue...

Look forward to read more for ages!

P.S. I will read some more chapters, then no more because I want to enjoy the story on my kindle!

Name: Hugh Blair (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Feb 2023 14:54:55 · Für: Chapter 1

Very cool beginning. @evan I was disappointed in King’s Fall not because of the ending but the way it came about. It seemed like you had given up on Westin, Odysseus and Gracen and rushed to the end. They showed none of the grit and determination but seemed to accept that going through the motions was enough. 

This is hopefully a renewal of the old fire that propelled the original. 

Name: Alejandro (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Feb 2023 12:09:33 · Für: Chapter 1

Love it!

Name: StarStrike (Anonymous) · Datum: 02 Feb 2023 11:21:06 · Für: Chapter 1

Thank You Evan. Great start to a new series. 

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