Perhaps it's time for a bit of serious disruption to the Empire's "Lines of Communications," which I assume were well mapped out by Steph as he transited into and out of Imperial Space much like the actions of PT and German E-Boats of WWII.
Archangel F/GB vessels - thought they were just going to be Gunboats. Fighter/gunboat no longer being an accurate description.
If this is just to re-cap, no worries.
I would love that one of the next generation weapons were called Boadicea arrows!
The Jeopardy theam I'm stuck in my head. Just waiting for the next chapter
Ch. 22
on the edge of my seat! No edits noticed.
No citing notes for ch. 21
Chapter 18.
Consideration: as written: "Neither side could realistically mount, or survive, just a thing." Recommend": Neither side could realistically mount, or survive, such an endeavor (or operation).
Wow, changing text size above (apparenlty) lost all my comments.
I was just wondering if there might be a moment when it is necessary for Odysseus to fire the weapons upon immediate re-entry into normal space after a transition jump.
Also, (I think I mneioned this), Odysseus might be able to explain how he super sped the ship past Misrem's battle group.
Love the story! Hate hte suspense! :^)
...they’d have had several near impacts between cruisers
...It was defying every reasoning behind the joining
...
Nice...
Thought they were going to use the heliogun on the fleet.
On my god, don't stop writing. please!!!! this is the very best
Sorry just being a fan.
Not to bad, not bad at all but I think you can do better with chapter 23..
oh man,on man, on man. I can't wait
i have no problems with chapter 22. Still can't find the 🌟 for rating this
current situation where he was now dealing with nowfour fleets… plus three half-fleets & a quarter fleet
the hand they’d been dealt
The radiation damage along alone was enough
The cruiser their they were now tailing had seen
Life didn’t care about what was things should be, she supposed
merely waiting for the truth true governing body to properly assume their duties.
a burst of tachyon particles was recorded from the other outer system
that we do not expect the Empire
Why? The for God’s sake, that
double checking the data he had one on hand before he winced.
The irritating scientist bumbled mumbled on his way out
I had a special data date scheduled tonight,”
no word for it, expect except perhaps a righteous
... result in them becoming a forces force that could
“If this goes down as we’re expecting… it’s NOT going to matter.” (added not)
Several minor typos & tense errors & use of "that" too often.
the staff on hand board down to the bare bones, ..
The task group had been recalled to Earth after the incident... Both were turning out new ships as quickly as they could, faster, in fact, ... Empire was an existential a threat to humanity's existence.
Use another word for "existential" - extinction
1st. Using the word 'that' WAY too many times. Take at least half of them out
2-Emilia had believed that fate have had smiled on
3 x ... had an a short but powerful urge...
On my god, their gonna blow the $h1tt out of that quarter fleet.
Hehehe oh! that's just evil, in a good way.
I just can't express how much I love this new book.a
Also I can find where the 🌟 are for the review mine would be 5 stars of i knew where they were.
Thank Evan Great novel
Shouldn't the ship be called AEV Jesse James?
Presuming ship was named after the outlaw in the Younger-James Gang. Jessie is a girl's name.
Also, is Captain Waters one of the old Odyssey crew?
The series gets better and better.