Lieutenant Lane shifted at her station when the computer alerted her to contacts leaving the planet. She leaned forward, curious as the computer clearly showed two where she’d only expected on. 

 

Should be "one"

“Good,” Brigham said, taking the command station without a further word. He pulled the keyboard on the lock-arm over to him and pecked a few commands into the computer, calling up the system report they had one file.

 

Should read "on file"

faster and more efficient for him to jump his entire ship into the system

can a partial ship jump?

 

 

Can't wait to learn more about Grace.